Area designing contest

[NinjaBoss420316]

Kk, Covie here, I think I just might have an area.



This area is located in the desert, and surprizingly, there is a small lake located there that remains full all year round and never dries up. It used to be a trading lake, as back when it was used the people found it hard to walk great distances in the desert and thus built boats to sail across. A great many have sunk there, providing great habitats for pokemon. There also is a lot of treasures to be found down in the sunken ships, as not many explorers have searched down there. The boats are hard to find though as the water is actually quite murky, but the pokemon enjoy it.

Region:South

Pokemon:Lots of sand types, water types too around the lake. Probably a few rock types, and maybe a desert dwelling bug type or 2

If this is any good, just let me know! Thanks,

-Covie

[Admiral Striker General]

First of all, you didn't name it. Second, images must be a certain size range, wider and shorter. Finally, we already have an oasis. 'x3 We don't need another large water area in the desert.

[Admiral Striker General]

Northern Reaches

Mt. Everesstone

This distinctive peak lies just past the foothills northeast of the capital, boasting a few small lakes and streams, an expanse of scattered forest, and even a few shallow caves. It is said that just below the surface, the entire mountain contains a giant Everstone. Because of this, all the Pokemon in the area are in their first stage, and neither they nor outsiders will evolve while here, even under item influence, though just a few miles away it again becomes possible even for those who have lived on the mountain since birth. Possibly due to this odd nature, the area is serene, and the Pokemon here are generally friendly if a bit timid and skeptic of humans.

Pokemon: Unevolved |3


That look good Jay?

[Jay]

x3 ya that looks good, SG =3

[Admiral Striker General]

|3; Then in light of the fact the North desperately needs places and Ether has been gone for three solid weeks now (and judging by her FB seems to be on vacation? No telling for how long) I'm going to approve this and award us each $400 and... *rolls* ... *SNORT* It keeps trying to give Jay a Kyogre. "XD;;

x'3 Jay a Beartic. Roll for me while I update our money?

[Jay]

XD;; GIVEMETHEKYOGRE *shot* x3 ok oh hey SG gets a Dragonite. x'3 noice. And yay money!

[Admiral Striker General]

FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFf. orz

But I don't WANT a third Dragonite.. xD

Alaric: :U I WANT A DRAGON?

>3> *SMACKS DOWN* TOO BAD, you have to EARN yours.

Alaric: orz

x3 Mmm I guess I'll throw it at Kali to Shadow and sell. Unless I figure out a WIP that would like eet..

[Jay]

=P Give it to Ryan, pft.

[Admiral Striker General]

X3 MEH. He'll be fine without one too.

Central Capital

EMINENCE ESSENTIAL CENTER

Similar to the Prestige Precept Center (better known as the "Pre-Gym") in Orre, this large facility was once a well-organized and somewhat exclusive training center for well-off trainers to practice, learn, and challenge the center staff. However, the temporary ban on training shut it down until the Rebellion, and ever since it has been re-opened by volunteers simply as a place for any trainer who is interested to gather for battles or just meeting other trainers. Things are no longer so eminent in appearance or even organization as they once were, but it's still quite spacious, offering plenty of room for many battles and spectators. Occasionally the volunteers will also bring food to open a concession stand, though this varies greatly.

[Jay]

It looks fine to me. =3

*rolls*

Slowking .3. and 300 Pen.

[Willow]

Neetlheim Ruins

Long, long ago Neetlheim was a great city. It was known for the ice type Pokemon that it trained and traded with the rest of the world, the city flourished. However, that all came to a stop one day. A irresponsible gang of fire type trainers came in to town as a pit stop while heading down south one day and released the Pokemon they had deemed 'untrainable'. The truth was that they where not untrainable, just feral. However their trainers where to lazy to try to attempt to train them, so they abandoned them. Once abandoned the now wild fire types went on a rampage, burning down the town. All that is left of Neetlheim are ruins and a few dead trees. Snow never lasts here because it is melted by the many fire types, the descendants of those that first burnt down Neetlheim. However the ruins has more then just fire types, you just might see a ghost Pokemon, the spirits of the citizens that died in the fire.


Pokemon: Fire tyes and ghost types, sometimes a stray ice type might wander in to the ruins.

[Jay]

To be honest the history for it sounds a little bland. How would a group of trainers lose control of their pokemon at that magnitude? Maybe make it like a gang wanted money or something that the town refused to give and they set it on fire or something? Or hmm what else.

[Willow]

Fixed, a group of rampaging fire types could burn down a town, right?

[Jay]

Ya but that still leaves quite a bit of poltholes 'x3; Like if the city was known for its Ice types, what would a group of fire trainers be doing around?

[Willow]

Fixed

[Admiral Striker General]

Hey gaiz, here's a thought:

REBELS. x3

It's more believable to still be in ruins with no rebuilding and Fire Pokemon still around if it was only two years ago, and more believable to have been burned down if clearly very intentional. We could make it the birthplace of Nolan and a once-wealthy town or something to explain why it would've been a target. x3 Thoughts and feedback?

[Jay]

^ Genius. xD I like the birthplace of Nolan thing a lot. x3 And that the rebels actually destroyed something moar *shot*

[Admiral Striker General]

x3 So it's not all at once we could make it a few months later too. Like... four and a half. xP

[Jay]

xD random number SG?

[Admiral Striker General]

XP Exactly. Random is more realistic than exacts!

.3. Though I realized. Nolan is kind of Ether's brainchildthing, so maybe we should just make it the ambiguous birthplace of "many royals" and leave it open as to whether or not Nolan may be included. .3. *nodnod*

X3 Also.. This can explain a number of the nobles with ambiguous family deaths. XP Where it's not explained further than "killed by rebels", HUZZAH! X3

RUINS OF NEETLHEIM(*)

Neetlheim was once a wealthy and thriving city: the birthplace of many of the royal line and a sort of gathering place for nobles. When not in noble homes or Era Castle, many of their social events were held here. However, it is for this very reason the area now lies in ruins. Some four and a half months after the coup, Rebel forces unleashed masses of Fire Pokemon on the city. However, the fires grew out of control far faster than anticipated, and most of the attackers perished with the residents. As a result, most of the Pokemon became wild, and now wander the ruins along with their descendants and others their presence has attracted. Some earthen Pokemon have taken refuge from the cold here as well, and occasionally ghosts wander, allegedly drawn by the spirits of the deceased.

(* = Neetlheim or Neetelheim? Maybe Neetbelheim? Nitelheim? XP Since I'm sure no one got it in full the reason I told Willow to use this name was combining Nibelheim and Neet, the home towns of Cloud Strife from FF7 and Dart from Legend of Dragoon, both of which were epic games of similar style for the PS1 and both towns being burned to the ground prior to the start of the game. XP)