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Post by Ethereal on Oct 12, 2010 11:34:46 GMT -5
Sorry ^^' this time it's a beautifly? Hopefully that's a bit more speedy for you. You get one sum of money per post of submissions (you had a few on one post). But Wharfenfair does count as a new one so you get 600 pokedollars.
Jay: The hot springs are accepted. I might make it into a spa if that's ok? x3 You receive 200 pokedollars and a mankey
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Post by Jay on Oct 12, 2010 11:45:28 GMT -5
xD Spa works heh still serves its purpose~*shot* anyways yay a mankey
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Post by Ryder on Oct 12, 2010 16:06:41 GMT -5
(you can change any of the names)
Old School House (Central) This old school sits in a forest just on the edge of the Central city. Time has taken his building apart, what was once a proud school is now tumbling rocks. Many people don't even both to come here, as its falling apart, and how is a hazard to all who stay in its walls. Since its so old, some of its floors are giving way, and if you don't watch your step you may fall from the attic to the basement.
Pokemon: Normal/Flying/bug
Lava Pool (South) Deep out in the desert is a somewhat active volcano, the last time it exploded was 50 years ago. Deep down in its belly their is hot lava, that shimmer and sits waiting for the next time it blows up. Only strong fire type pokemon are seen father down into the volcano. Before you reach the volcano itself you will see hundreds of trees that are burnt and dead, these were the trees that were hit 50 years ago. So its up to you, do you want these strong fire pokemon, or would you rather play it safe?
Pokemon: Fire/Some flying
Sunken Ship (West) An old ship found just off the cost of the beach. During a bad storm this ship tried to come ashore but ended up crashing, and sinking. If you really want to you can swim under the water, and enter the ship itself. Their is one good thing about this ship, its a hot spot for water pokemon
Pokemon; Water/Some flying
Echo Canyons (South) A large set of canyons right in the middle of the desert. With steep ledges, and cliffs that drop off without warning. This is one place where you have to watch your footing. This place is also big, and its really easy to get lost, and spend days trying to find your way out. Only the pokemon around here seem to know how to get out, but you won't find very nice pokemon out here.
Pokemon: Dragon/Ground/Steel/Rock
Spraying Waterfall (East) A large water fall, that is very deep in the forest. Its one of the few waterfalls found in the Era, and its the main water source in the forest. Something odd about this waterfall is that it runs into an old Volcano hole. The plants grow thick around here, and up in one of the oldest trees is a tree house that stays standing.
Pokemon: Water/Grass
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Post by Ethereal on Oct 12, 2010 17:00:16 GMT -5
Ryder: Lava pool is accepted. You receive 100 pokedollars and an onix.
Hm I really do like the idea of canyons. Maybe we could put together Ryder and Jay's ideas and add something unique into the mix as well?
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Post by Ryder on Oct 12, 2010 17:07:42 GMT -5
yeah that would be cool
xD an Onix! Oddly enough I've been wanting one of those, so I could turn it into a Steelix
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Post by ★ Ryuujin ! on Oct 12, 2010 17:39:34 GMT -5
Sweet, Thanks Ethe! :3 What about their Pokemon lists, will you do them, or would you want me to?
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Post by Ethereal on Oct 12, 2010 17:51:36 GMT -5
I'd like it if you would do them, Ryuu.
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Post by ★ Ryuujin ! on Oct 12, 2010 17:52:59 GMT -5
Alright ^^ No problemo at all. *Goes to work on those*
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Post by Ethereal on Oct 13, 2010 10:36:31 GMT -5
Southern WastesDrifter's Gorge
A mighty ravine that was carved with the hands of heavy winds. The same gusts still toil at its steep rocky walls today. An ancient stone tower sits among jagged outcroppings at the highest rise in the middle of the gorge. The area surrounding it is relativly flat, which makes the tower a good place to rest. The only path across this precipice is by way of a rickety bridge. You could climb down the walls and see if you can make it to the other side, but that might be just as treacherous as the first option. Barring those, you'd better hope you can fly over, or you'll be making a very long trip around. During Nolan’s reign outlaws took refuge in the gorge and some still do. [/blockquote]
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Post by Admiral Striker General on Oct 13, 2010 11:15:05 GMT -5
x'3 Do you want SG to judge so Etha can haz prizes too?
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Post by Ethereal on Oct 13, 2010 11:28:49 GMT -5
Yes please.
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Post by Admiral Striker General on Oct 13, 2010 11:52:08 GMT -5
....o3o Actually it confuzzles me now that I reread it.. How is the tower situated exactly? Due to the way it's worded it makes me wonder, is the tower on the higher side, or is there a raised piece in the middle at some point? Also, this doesn't stretch the whole wasteland, right? x3 Can we add a small random line just before the last about "Barring those, you'd better hope you can fly over, or you'll be making a very long trip around."? x3
Will wait for answers before judging money quality, but will approve and go ahead and give you a...... *generator*.. Corphish. ^^ .... << >> *mocks Ash's* "^>^ CORphishCOR<3" x33
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Post by Ethereal on Oct 13, 2010 12:00:22 GMT -5
Edited for clarity~
Ew corphish =p
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Post by Admiral Striker General on Oct 13, 2010 12:11:10 GMT -5
xD Eww Weezing! Fair lottery is fair! ;P
... ._.; I'm still lost. Is the tower on one side or a piece of land in the middle? 'x3; I'm sorry, I just can't seem to comprehend "highest point of a hole". 'xD; *SHOT*
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Post by Ethereal on Oct 13, 2010 12:14:40 GMT -5
Canyons/gorges/ravines have walls and places of land SG x3 It's not just a hole. There are cliffs and higher places and lower ledges.
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Post by Admiral Striker General on Oct 13, 2010 12:36:46 GMT -5
"Hole" was an exaggeration, honey... I know what a gorge is and googled pictures to make SURE I wasn't mistaking it... Why is it so hard to just SAY "one side" or "a middle rise"? '^^ JUST. SAY. ONE. PLEASE. 'xD;
And if one side, is it at a high point IN THE WALL or like at the top just at the edge next to the divide?
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Post by Jay on Oct 13, 2010 12:39:03 GMT -5
Western Waters Stone MarshA large marsh with a landmark of stone pillars in a circular pattern in the center of it. The stone pillars are believed to hold some significance for Psychic pokemon that are naturally drawn to the point. The area within and a few meters beyond the stone area is completely firm, yet after that is marshland. Pokemon: Psychic, Ghost, Dark, Water, some Flying
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Post by Ethereal on Oct 13, 2010 12:41:23 GMT -5
Er I like the idea but can we have it not based so closely on stonehenge? I feel we can do better than that xD Maybe have like a stone tomb or something in the middle of a marsh? Also it seems like we have too many places focused on dark/psychic/ghost types :s
Fine I'll say it's a middle rise xD
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Post by Jay on Oct 13, 2010 12:49:30 GMT -5
xP but the fun of it is the fact that it is so close to Stonehenge! :S but fine sure lol.
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Post by Maid Melody on Oct 13, 2010 12:57:36 GMT -5
Alain Beach (Western Waters) This rocky beach is home to many wild water pokemon. There is a remnant of an old dock to the left of the beach where quite a few Wingull can be seen perched on the posts, to the right of the beach, a stream runs into the river and what appears to be a cave is a little further off. Many houses and restaurants surround this beach as many come to visit especially during low tides when many pokemon are washed up on the shore in tide-pools that normally wouldn't be seen elsewhere. Pokemon: Water, some grass, flying, possible ground types
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